Because of Blood
Nanowrimo 2009
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Cricket
10:44 AM on December 02, 2009
Wow, great ending to a great story!! The last three chapters are very suspensful!! And a very touching ending. Thanks for sharing this with me Shaun, and I do hope you get this published.
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carla
10:22 AM on December 02, 2009
Great story!. I think I like Beautiful Noise for the title better.
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Cricket
12:56 PM on November 30, 2009
I haven't been able to check back here as much as I would have liked, but this morning I was able to read up to chapter 16. I'm hooked! I've run out of time today and really hope that this site will stay up after November, because I really want to read the last few chapters!!
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okieload
08:01 AM on November 20, 2009
Thank you, everyone, who has been reading. It really helps to have this kind of feedback. I have slowed down a bit with travel and such, but I will continue with the chapters until I am done. Please continue reading! Thanks especially, Carla!
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Cricket
10:28 AM on November 15, 2009
Hey Shaun!
Wow! Just finished chapter 8 and can't wait for the rest of it. I love it!!!!
Wow! Just finished chapter 8 and can't wait for the rest of it. I love it!!!!
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Carla
03:54 PM on November 12, 2009
You have a great talent. If this story were already published I wouldn't be able to put it down. As it is, I am anxiously waiting for Chapter 9.
I disagree with the comment that 'bright' would work better than 'sunny' in the prologue.
I disagree with the comment that 'bright' would work better than 'sunny' in the prologue.
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Kala Palmerr (:
01:27 PM on November 12, 2009
I read more, it keeps getting better! (: Good job!
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Miranda Phelps
01:05 PM on November 12, 2009
I love what I've read so far and I can't wait to read the rest of it! Keep on writing!
