Wow, great ending to a great story!! The last three chapters are very suspensful!! And a very touching ending. Thanks for sharing this with me Shaun, and I do hope you get this published.
I haven't been able to check back here as much as I would have liked, but this morning I was able to read up to chapter 16. I'm hooked! I've run out of time today and really hope that this site will stay up after November, because I really want to read the last few chapters!!
Thank you, everyone, who has been reading. It really helps to have this kind of feedback. I have slowed down a bit with travel and such, but I will continue with the chapters until I am done. Please continue reading! Thanks especially, Carla!
You have a great talent. If this story were already published I wouldn't be able to put it down. As it is, I am anxiously waiting for Chapter 9.
I disagree with the comment that 'bright' would work better than 'sunny' in the prologue.